Antigone Cadmus

Heeelllllllllllooo, Anti-pop! Here as requested! The sun towered in an empty and bleak winter sky. However, this was not appreciated in the least, for it omitted little heat. I really ...

Hey, Pandapez! Here as requested! Review I was going to miss Katie’s birthday. I would put this later in the story. It seems really random. Your character is saying "Oh ...

Hey, Forever Threnody! Here as requested! Have the stars abandoned us lifeless? This line is a bit confusing. Who is lifeless, the stars or us? Make it more clear. How ...

I was scrolling through Fantasy and I saw the word "vampire." I immediately clicked it. ^_^ I love, love vampires. Anyway, nice to meet you, Emotastic. YWS is a great ...

Hey there, AudreyViolet6! I'm Sakura, and I'll be your reviewer today. ^_^ First of all, I'd like to tell you: Please don't post numerous sections of your story in one ...

Dracula was also meant as a metaphor for the sexual liberation of women- not totally as a vampire novel. :) Anne Rice is amazing. Her writing is gorgeous, suspensful... everything. ...

Here as requested, anti-pop! As I warned you, my poetry skills are extremely lacking (unless your counting ancient verse/prose poetry...) Anyway... Onto the review! This was absolutely lovely. I only ...

Here again, RGallagher! Mom wanted to Kira some I think you meant, "Mom wanted to buy Kira some..." “Mom, Kira isn’t going to like anything from Macys,” I told her ...

Hey, RGallagher! 要求されるここに! I think Rosey stole most of my nit-picks... I was jolted awake, rubbing my eyes and trying to figure out what was going on. "Was" messes up ...

Back again, Night Mistress! I like that you revised it, I hate critiquing things and watching the author ignore them. You have taken suggestions and improved this. Kudos. ^_^ *hands ...

Hey, Amon! This was really good. Just a few nit-picks: Ethan watched the skater’s wheel around performing as many tricks as they could, and boys that sprayed their girlfriends with ...

Hey, Hotaru-Chan! Your name means firefly? Cute. ^_^ Onto the review of your story. First of all, this story has some language in it. You need to rate it accordingly. ...

Hey, Boltageman! You still need to write those reviews- you need four now! Onto the review... The fluff around the hospital made it look old and broken. How does the ...

Hey, NYC Girl! Enough of these fluffy "ZOMG THAT WAS AMAZING!" reviews. Here is your real review. Also, it is the rules here on YWS that you review 2 pieces ...

Continue you it if you want. I find the best thing to do when I have an idea is to simply write. I don't outline or anything. I just start ...